Sabtu, 05 Mei 2012

Analytical

Analytical Exposition
Being Fat Matters
Do you know if you are too fat, you may have serious problems with your health? A group of doctors wrote a report about some of the effects of too much fat.
One important effect is on the heart. If you are fat, your heart has to work harder. This may lead to a heart attack; or it may lead to other heart problem.
In addition, extra fat can also change the amount of sugar in your blood. This can cause serious disease such as diabetes.
Furthermore high blood pressure is another possible result of being fat.
More studies are needed about all these problems. But one thing is clear, extra fat may makes your life shorter.
Taken From: Look Ahead 2

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Purpose
To persuade by presenting arguments
To analyse or explain “how” and “why”
Text Organization
A Thesis: an opinion or a proposal of something. A thesis from the text above is;
Do you know if you are too fat, you may have serious problems with your health? A group of doctors wrote a report about some of the effects of too much fat.*(parragraph: 1)
Arguments: the reasons of the proposal. Arguments from the text above is;
One important effect is on the heart. If you are fat, your heart has to work harder. This may lead to a heart attack; or it may lead to other heart problem.
In addition, extra fat can also change the amount of sugar in your blood. This can cause serious disease such as diabetes.
Furthermore high blood pressure is another possible result of being fat.(pg: 2-4)
Reiteration: some times what has been expressed again in the end of the text. Reiterations from the text above is;
More studies are needed about all these problems. But one thing is clear, extra fat may makes your life shorter.(pg: 5)
Hortatory Expotition
Should Ads be Banned from TV programs?
Iam writing to complain about ads on TV. There are so many ads, especially during my favorite programs. I think they should be stopped for a number of reasons.
First, ads are a nuisance. They go on for a long time and there are so many. Sometimes there seems to be more ads than programs.
Second, ads are a bad influence on people. They try to encourage people to buy unhealthy food like bees, soft drinks, candies, and chips. In other words, they make people want things they do not really need and can not afford.
Finally, ads play role in what programs people watch. That is because there are lots of ads in popular programs that a lot of people watch. Some programs which are not so popular get stopped because they do not attract enough ads, even though those programs may be someone’s favorite.
For those reasons, i think TV stations should stop showing ads. They interrupt programs. They are  a bad influence on people and they sometimes put a stop to people’s favorite shows. I am sick of ads and now i mostly watch movie in cinema.
Taken From: Steps to Write


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Purpose: to persuade the reader or listener that something should or not be the case. Text

Text Organization:
Title    Should Ads be Banned from TV programs?      
Thesis
Announcement of issue concern    Iam writing to complain about ads on TV. There are so many ads, especially during my favorite programs. I think they should be stopped for a number of reasons.      
Argument 1
Reasons for concern that lead to recommendation    First, ads are a nuisance. They go on for a long time and there are so many. Sometimes there seems to be more ads than programs.      
Argument 2    Second, ads are a bad influence on people. They try to encourage people to buy unhealthy food like bees, soft drinks, candies, and chips. In other words, they make people want things they do not really need and can not afford.      
Argument 3    Finally, ads play role in what programs people watch. That is because there are lots of ads in popular programs that a lot of people watch. Some programs which are not so popular get stopped because they do not attract enough ads, even though those programs may be someone’s favorite.      
Recommendation
Statement of what ought or ought not to happen    For those reasons, i think TV stations should stop showing ads. They interrupt programs. They are  a bad influence on people and they sometimes put a stop to people’s favorite shows. I am sick of ads and now i mostly watch movie in cinema.      
     Taken From: Steps to Write   


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